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O-la Sanctus? by ~teraphim:iconteraphim:

Categories Digital Art > Paintings & Airbrushing > Landscapes & Scenery

©2004-2009 ~teraphim
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Really sketchy, I know. I liked it before I finish the dress....*_*;;; now I'm not so sure. But, this is my first attempt at non-line work, and even then I cheated because I worked off of the original doodle (which is in my scraps). I think I liked the doodle more. XDDD I also left the clouds sketchy because I just liked that look better, but it doesn't go too well with her smoothed skin and things. Aaaah well! :heart:

And yes, I abused the grass tool because I'm LAZY. D:

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`hokuto Dec 9, 2004, 5:48:14 PM
What gorgeous smooth coloring... The colors are so very rich, and I love the texture of it. :heart: Very graceful work.

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*gokuyert Dec 9, 2004, 5:55:28 PM
hey now! i like the way you did the grass, and i like how the dress is flowing with the wind and i really like the purplish shading and the clouds. the only thing that looks strange to me is the breast, to me it looks like its up high and to the left

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~ikariakiko Dec 9, 2004, 6:14:30 PM
i dont normally do constructive criticism cuz i dont wanna get people mad. if you find the dress annoying, you should take the eraser (or burn/dodge tool, depending on your program i guess) and put the opacity down wayyyy down, and make the size huge. makes changing lighting easy as pie.. mm.. pie. er.. yeah. i mean around her bum. so the dress has shadow and light, and it will look rounded, not flat.

or.. something.

i tried. :cries:

don't hate me, tera-dono, i love your work!

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~ReijiGin Dec 9, 2004, 6:22:31 PM
It's still freakin' awesome =x.x=

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~Serenity-Winner Dec 9, 2004, 7:24:21 PM
It's whooshy and cool, but I agree... I like the skecth better ^_^

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~teraphim Dec 9, 2004, 9:00:06 PM
Why in the world would I be mad at you? XD I'm really grateful for the critisism, since I need it really. :D I wanted the dress to have a very deep flow, and not to show off the poor girl's bum, so I made it shadowed. But it does make her look very flat ass-wise. XDDD

:hug: Thankyou~!

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~stoic1985 Dec 9, 2004, 9:03:49 PM
you blow my mind away when you do pieces like this. x_x
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~Kumorinoko Dec 9, 2004, 9:55:49 PM
Ooh, this looks like a painting. Those clouds are very beautiful in a rough paint-y sort of way. The flow of the dress is lovely as well, and the detail on her hair...I admire her left foot as well.

I agree with the above reviewer on part of the dress shading; it does look like she has no butt. XP Also, the curve of her left upper arm as attached to her shoulder looks slightly strange. But overall this is quite pretty. ^_^
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~ikariakiko Dec 10, 2004, 4:26:55 AM
yay i am loved. :D

i really loved how flowy it looks. -jealous- i have the toughest time with fabrics, because i can never make the folds look like folds. shading and lighting--great! but those damned folds.

-growl-

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The blue disappears under Astarin’s bruised lids at last, because the first thing I do is close those sightless eyes so he’ll never look at me again. -- Of Comfort, Part 1
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